Free useful truths for Graffiti James

January 31, 2011 - 6:29 pm Comments Off

half way thru the movie the main character starts having sex with other men.
nasty. Im into graffii but gay sex ruined the movie for me. I had no idea this was a gay romance movie.

Can you read this and tell me what you think?
I would really appreciate a moment of your time and an honest opinion of this extract from my story… Would you be interested in reading onOutside seemed like the only place that made the slightest bit of sense to him but it wasn’t exactly a nice day in itself. The appearance of the weather from the inside was deceiving as the sun was now out of sight and clouds were rapidly building up, they seemed to hang lower than usual. James didn’t seem bothered at all, he preferred rain, thunder, wind and lightning over anything else. Somehow a blue sky with the warming rays of sunshine reflecting on the Stonebridge estates didn’t seem to fit right. He began walking down an isolated road, a few miles ahead stood a red shielded bus stop with a row of flip down benches attached to the sides. As James drew closer he noticed broken glass on the floor and two cans of Graffiti James empty beer rolling around synchronized to the fierce winds. Careless of the unwelcoming surroundings he stood under the bus shelter and leant against an old advertisement of a film released two months ago. Across the road and directly opposite the bus stop stood a small convenient store which had layers of graffiti covering the once beautifully painted walls. The front door was unwelcoming, and a large sign hanging from the inside with “closed” in a bold black typeface would surely repel any potential customer. The lights were on from the inside, but the outside looked cold regardless. Shifted suddenly from his thoughts James put his cold hands into his tracksuit pocket and brought out his vibrating phone, the caller ID read private. Seeing this he reluctantly answered the incoming call. ”Yeah who’s this?” he asked in a noticeably irritated manner. On the other end was a female, James’s voice softened as he let out the most breathtaking smile. His smile could light up a room if it came from his heart, but he hardly ever allowed it to. “Oh yeah yeah, Dionne! What’s going on B?” They spoke for five minutes whilst James paced up and down on the broken glass until the 347 bus came through, by this time he knew it was time to put the conversation to an end. After closely examining the driver and the people……….Thankyou JDubbs, Lol – I will do that right away.Thankyou Emma – He calls her “B” because it’s slang lool i dont know why short for baby or something. Ha thats interesting most people like the main characters to be good looking but i get what you are saying i will twig that up!! =]O wow – thats exactly what i was saying when i read your comment “RED” – Third comment – Thankyouu times a million – I am taking your comments and putting it on notepad lool so i can look back, thankyou =]
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