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An online guide on graffiti bags from china

April 30, 2011 - 8:34 am 17 Comments
graffiti-bag An online guide on graffiti bags from china

I had to buy other products before I realized that graffiti bags from china was the best choice in price. The negative things I

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17 Responses to “An online guide on graffiti bags from china”

  1. Makenna Says:
    April 30th, 2011 at 9:54 am

    Ok, so what do I think of this? Well, I don’t know how old you are, but from this I’m guessing still pretty young. It seems very amateur. There are a lot of grammar and spelling issues, first off. But those type of things can be fixed pretty easily. I don’t know…honestly it didn’t hold my attention very well. I tried reading the whole thing, but got bored. There was a lot of useless information that didn’t further the plot. Or maybe I just felt that way about it because I was bored. When writing, you want to try to capture your readers’ attention with every single word. So think about whether or not each of them is essential to get your point across, and try cutting out everything that is not actually important. Perhaps you should try joining a writing group? Or I would recommend reading the book The First Five Pages by Noah Lukeman who is a literary agent. The book has a lot of good advice about writing. Good luck and continue working at it.Side note: I don’t understand the thumbs down. Should I just say that this is awesome and leave it at that? That’s not helpful in any way, especially if it’s not true. The question asks what we think of this writing, not for empty compliments.

  2. Frank Zappa Says:
    April 30th, 2011 at 9:42 pm

    I saw it at the Victoria’s Secret store in The Volusia Mall in Daytona Beach,FL. Hope they still have it.

  3. Moi Says:
    May 1st, 2011 at 9:41 am

    Porsche Carrera GT-440000$Hermes Birkin Bag-37,000$Selfridges & Co. gold belt-32000$VVS1 Diamonds iPhone Case-20,000$Guerlain Limited Edition Mistouko Prestigious Baccarat-7000${H.Stern Highlight Stars Ring-6600$ (MATCHING)Oscar de la Renta Flower-5990${H.Stern Stars Earrings-4900$Gucci Marrakech medium shoulder bag-3700$Louis Vuitton Bowling Monogram Etoile Bag-3110$Ok, I hope that helps.

  4. Fiona Says:
    May 1st, 2011 at 10:09 pm

    Alright lets see what I can help to suggest. First it seems like it is a really clever idea, something different if I’ve read correctly. But it is confusing, I had to re-read and wonder how many other people this girl is.My first suggestion would be to ditch the first person. Because it seems to me (and I could be mislead) that these girls all share one body, and when not being used they are shoved away inside the mind. See the problem with this is you aren’t being consistent with the character, just narrating whoever is dominant presently. I would either pick one of these girls or just go omniscient on all them in third person. I think it would make it flow better.Second do not be afraid to be obvious blunt, if you want it across don’t be mysterious. Tell the reader what you want them to know for the most part. Of coarse for a good story not everything is going to be revealed but don’t be afraid to point some things out. (Most everything you take time to write in a story should have a purpose later.)At one point you write: “Because Mom and Dad warned you that you are not to go out in your natural appearance, that its dangerous.” I would elaborate on that. A memory so reason why this is dangerous. Because I have no clue from reading that. Telling why it is dangerous might give the reader some clue as to what is going on.Again I’m trying to keep in mind this is only an excerpt, and for that I can’t give you a truly clear idea at this. If I understood more about these girls, perhaps I could help more. I hope I helped (you did say you wanted harsh criticism).

  5. Expat Mike Says:
    May 2nd, 2011 at 10:33 am

    Only idea that came to mind quickly:Change the score to 3-0 (to signal a possible hat trick) and have hats bearing the city names or team logos flying onto the ice.

  6. notsosecretlove Says:
    May 2nd, 2011 at 10:22 pm

    Umm…I’m sorry but do you have any idea about suicidal thoughts & such? I really don’t think that you can write a book about this unless you have experienced it. I go through depression and I know what it’s like. You don’t try to fit in for God’s sake! You don’t care enough to fit in. Just wanted to let you know that. I’m sorry. Too boring. Not enough personal experience to write about. And if you have experienced it then you don’t really exactly put it in an interesting way.

  7. Listen to Autumn. Says:
    May 3rd, 2011 at 10:14 am

    ^^^^ Me is right…You have to keep writing before you know a title. And honey, let me be honest…Most of the time (NOT ALL, SO I COULD BE WRONG) your first book won’t get published. :( I know, I know… It sucks. I’m a writer too, but dispite that fact, I still write.

  8. Dylan L Says:
    May 3rd, 2011 at 9:40 pm

    yes, i suggest it to every one

  9. Muffett : Says:
    May 4th, 2011 at 9:52 am

    how about heading over to the local lumber yard and purchasing a few blue tarps and duct tape…you will also be able to reuse the tarps for events later on

  10. VuittonLuver Says:
    May 4th, 2011 at 10:23 pm

    Its supposed to be from the new launch of the Stephen Spruce Graffiti line. BUT this style was never made. So its trying to be from that line in a bag style that was never made in that line. Its trying to be what looks like a Neo Cabby of some sorts though

  11. omg Says:
    May 5th, 2011 at 10:31 am

    If you want that specific one then yes Claire’s would be the place however it does look like something Roxy would carry try searching on google shopping “Graffiti Purse”. Hope I helped.

  12. Karen Says:
    May 5th, 2011 at 9:45 pm

    aww, happy early sweet 16. :) well, i think you can hire guys legally, since they are not vandalizing.you could ask your school mates that do nice graffiti thing, and pay them for a fee?my 18th birthday cake was a 3d picture of a bikini girl. haha.you could get that if you want. (:non alcoholic drinks. hmm.. i love fruit punch. :D you could have pepsi and diet coke?

  13. drjimbillybob Says:
    May 6th, 2011 at 10:32 am

    My favourite event would be the boxing given my sick sense of humour…..Id also tune in to watch the hammer event.

  14. Rammy M Says:
    May 6th, 2011 at 9:48 pm

    your fu****d.. u could get into a community college tho

  15. JAy_JAy Says:
    May 7th, 2011 at 10:09 am

    Example:Before:”Arriving at the famous park I head to the public washrooms to change with Alexis. I wait while Tony checks it. Getting an all clear from him I head in leaving Tony and Rick posted outside. ” After:Arriving at the famous park, I went straight to the public washrooms to change with Alexis, but we had to wait until Tony said that the coast is clear. Getting an approval from him, Alexis and I then head in the washroom leaving Tony and Rick posted outside.Check your wording and grammar. I couldn’t comprehend it a few times. Thats my opinion.Hope this helps!

  16. L.A. Princess Says:
    May 7th, 2011 at 10:27 pm

    Most LV bags have the serial # engraved some where on the bag but the neverfull has a little tag with the serial # on it. It should be near the top of the bag. Good luck.

  17. M G Says:
    May 8th, 2011 at 10:04 am

    Yes, I’d read more. It’s gripping, pullsyou in. Good stories are suppose tohook the reader.The main character is coming acrossas a girl.